This book of verse, which is on its way to the printing press, is aptly woven at a time when human character and developments have fulfilled most of the Biblical prophecies; from Moses to Jesus - from revival of interest in Satanism and witchcraft to the brink of a devastating war.
Beware The Drives comprised of 127 verses, is not a complex evangelical treatise, but a direct plea, with thin poetic disguises, to human conscience to turn from bad to good. It is a search for answers to the larger problem of living, answers to the miserable conditions in the nation, and, most of all, the visceral question of man.
Akombi, in a serene mood and supplicating tone, captures the superficiality and existentialism of the age with intricate but unfussy verses penned in simple, laconic words. But so much remain hidden between the words.
From the poem that reads:
Quite depressing
When a kid points
At another kid, born of his father
And says: ’there goes my enemy for life’
Even more so
When people of the world
Children of one God
Get so scared about their enemies for life
Akombi’s manuscript is a major event. Humanity is pitted against humanity. Man has overlooked the most authentic voice of all - the voice of reason - and now leaves in fear, like the Zulu in Patti Waldmeir’s "Anatomy Of A Miracle" where the author says "life for a Zulu is short, militarist and brutish."
The poem "Whither The Claims" illustrates this frightening situation:
Whither the claims of humanity
When humans’ve lost their sense of dignity
And treat humans unlike humans
Rile humans
Rob humans
Rape humans
Rip humans
Whither the claims of humanity…
Beware The Drives is human drama - man’s follies and by way of a brisk twist, a moral tale. Akombi wants his poems to fully engage with the world of poverty, corruption, injustice, materialism, love, hate, forgiveness.
The poems are as clear as a school bell; nifty snippets of wise sayings loaded with philosophical nuances. "A Fervent Wish" says all about how the world would be better off if humans were more reflective:
How I wish
The world were tranquil
It’ll make humans
Hear the heartbeat of others
And the bidding of God
How I wish
Every folk were kind and gentle
It’ll make humans feel concerned about the mess
That’s spilling out
How I wish
Time, for a second, stood still
It’ll make man and woman
Check their steps
In the dance
Towards the unknown
At Ahmadou’s Deathbed, the dying dictator succumbs to a catatonic self-pity as he tries to relate his sinful past with shock realisation.
"…to keep a seat, so hot, so much dirt had to accumulate
The people, whose leader I was grew more and more feeble and I liked it
They called me their Draco and I liked that
The fear I had sowed in their hearts, had made them toe the lines I forged…
But see me now compatriot, I’m unable to do what I’d done
Quietly, I’m dying on an alien bed in an alien land
The guards in their thousands that I used to have,
Not even one stands by my death bed…
As I make my exit, I can hear death knocking with so much urgency…
Now that I die in this dismal room, I’ve learnt many a lesson…"
Akombi begins and concludes that man is dominated by fear, and in his "effort to conquer it, he resorts to unbridled aggression." This aggression, according to Akombi, is double-edged - can be used for the success of humanity at the same time, it is responsible for the ruthless destruction of mankind. Thus, fear is good if used properly but can have terrible consequences when misused.
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